A LOVE STORY...........
Dear friends,
let's start our new chain story
I hope every one know about this
let's start our new chain story
I hope every one know about this
Game. .but I just want to tel one more time.
One person starts a story, then another person adds
another bit of same story,
another bit of same story,
Then another person writes another bit to the story etc.
They are so much fun to do.
Does anyone like this idea?
If SO please come with your Story.. Than
If SO please come with your Story.. Than
Every one will fallow you. Add any characters you want,
twist the plot any way you want. I only have very few rules---
- don’t hog the story, and no chats peak.
no rude words or sexual references..
Should be suitable for family viewing
twist the plot any way you want. I only have very few rules---
- don’t hog the story, and no chats peak.
no rude words or sexual references..
Should be suitable for family viewing
Other than that go wild,
my comrades in writing.
PLESE REMEMBER I AM NOT A GOOD POET/ WRITER
BUT JUST I WANT TO HELP PEOPLE
I KNOW I CAN DO THIS MY SELF AND I AM DOING THAT TOO.
I KNEW THAT YOU ALL DOING AND HELPING LOT OF PEOPLE
WITH OUR MONEY/ SOME KIND OF
Social Survives in our normal life
but this is LIKE A GROUP WORK.
AND I AM SURE WE WILL ENJOY THIS WORK
SO LET'S START THE GAME!
HELPING HANDS
my comrades in writing.
PLESE REMEMBER I AM NOT A GOOD POET/ WRITER
BUT JUST I WANT TO HELP PEOPLE
I KNOW I CAN DO THIS MY SELF AND I AM DOING THAT TOO.
I KNEW THAT YOU ALL DOING AND HELPING LOT OF PEOPLE
WITH OUR MONEY/ SOME KIND OF
Social Survives in our normal life
but this is LIKE A GROUP WORK.
AND I AM SURE WE WILL ENJOY THIS WORK
SO LET'S START THE GAME!
HELPING HANDS
Dear friends
Here is the story...line
A ture love story like every love story..and.. in this story too there was one boy and one girl
both studied together in college both spend many years together....SO friends write about the
college life and romance between both of them..and write about the two families.
Suchitra looked at the man standing a little far away. His face resembles her colleae friend Vinayak.
He had the same blue colored eyes, the same slant way of standing, and same hair style. She had half a mind to go and ask him .Just then the bus came and she had to scamper into the bus. She would have forgotten he whole thing, but fate would not allow this. She had got a seta and sat down. There was an empty seat near hers and she absent mindedly observed that some young men has come and occupied it. She gave a sideward glance and absent mindedly looked at the guy through the corner of eyes. It was him! Vinayak. No doubt. He could see the small mole at the tip of his nose.
Suchitra was flabbergasted. She touched him on his arms and said "vinay." He gave her a blank stare. No sense of recognition. A sense of true surprise. With a voice which she had heard and worshiped so often he said "excuse me I don’t know you".
It was two years since he had an accident. The truck had hit his car when he was travelling from Bangalore to Mysore. He was in a coma for twenty days. He woke up remembering nothing. They said he was lucky to have been alive. He did not remember any thing that had happened in the past. Most of the memories had come back to him. But he knew something crucial about his love life is eluding him.
Suchitra was flabbergasted. She touched him on his arms and said "vinay." He gave her a blank stare. No sense of recognition. A sense of true surprise. With a voice which she had heard and worshiped so often he said "excuse me I don’t know you".
It was two years since he had an accident. The truck had hit his car when he was travelling from Bangalore to Mysore. He was in a coma for twenty days. He woke up remembering nothing. They said he was lucky to have been alive. He did not remember any thing that had happened in the past. Most of the memories had come back to him. But he knew something crucial about his love life is eluding him.
Sometimes he would hear a sweet voice, smell roses and perfume of a kind. Just like the one which came from the girl who was touching him now inside the bus. The same perfume. Who is this girl? Why is she so familiar with me? Questions and questions? He was slowly getting a head ache...... He sensed this beautiful girl, but could not remember. He tried hard, so hard that the world had started to spin... Flashes of his past began to hit him. A garden, the beach, a few giggles, two of them holding their hands..... I t was too much work for Vinayak, that he fainted on Suchitra's shoulders.
"Vinay! Vinay! Suchitra screamed. A few passengers, helped Suchi carry him out of the bus, and escorted her to the nearest hospital. Suchitra searched his bag that he carried, for his number. Vinayaks family had moved from the old house after his accident and she was totally
unaware of what was going on. It had been more than a year and the bubbly Suchi was no more bubbly and there was a deep sadness in her eyes. She asked the receptonist to call up Mrs and Mr.Sabesh Krishna, his parents. She waited for an hour and when the doctor said Vinay was OK but was sleeping, she decided to go. With a heavy heart she walked down to the entrance and as she stepped out, she came in face to face again with Mrs and Mr. Sabesh Krishna. The three of them looked at each other shocked and Suchi walked away to catch a taxi.
"What is she doing here?", asked Mrs. Krishna.
"Vinay! Vinay! Suchitra screamed. A few passengers, helped Suchi carry him out of the bus, and escorted her to the nearest hospital. Suchitra searched his bag that he carried, for his number. Vinayaks family had moved from the old house after his accident and she was totally
unaware of what was going on. It had been more than a year and the bubbly Suchi was no more bubbly and there was a deep sadness in her eyes. She asked the receptonist to call up Mrs and Mr.Sabesh Krishna, his parents. She waited for an hour and when the doctor said Vinay was OK but was sleeping, she decided to go. With a heavy heart she walked down to the entrance and as she stepped out, she came in face to face again with Mrs and Mr. Sabesh Krishna. The three of them looked at each other shocked and Suchi walked away to catch a taxi.
"What is she doing here?", asked Mrs. Krishna.
Suchitra hired a taxi and moved toward her parents house. She was so upset to see Vinay in this condition that she decided to took off from her work. On the way she informed her boss Mr. Moudgil about her inability to come for work. Mr. Moudgil a fifty plus gentleman assured her to no worry about work and take care of her. Then she dialed another number, on hearing his voice she tried to make her voice pleasant, “Manu..As I reached here, I felt severe headache, so I am not going for work today..I am going to see mumma”.
“Take care” two simple words from Manu spoke of his personality. He was a different kind of man. Sincere, sober and very calm person and romantic ..all the qualities he has of which any wife will be proud of. She too loved Manu a lot. Though her marriage was a forced one by circumstances created by Vinay’s parents, still she managed to come out of the shadow of memories of her love. Manu’s approach has helped her in this move. She remembers the day when she first informed Manu about her past, Manu was calm as usual “Suchi..I have a past too..let us forget our past..just live in present”.The drive to her mother's place was a long one and Suchi wanted to have a nap. She closed her eyes, not to sleep, but only to remember her long dead past. Suchi and Vinay had been great friends right form their childhood. Being neighbours both the families enjoyed each other's companies. Mr and Mrs. Mehra (Suchi's Parents) were a great couple who believed in love, compassion and trust.On the other hand , Mrs and Mr. Krishna, were also a wonderful couple, but Mrs. Krishna was a strict disciplinarian and a staunch orthodox.
THE GOLDEN HOMES COLONY
This was a colony where about a 50 families lived a beautiful life. The colony was built in such a way that it had a wonderful elementary school, a high school , a nice little hospital ,a lovely park for thekids to play and ofcourse a shopping complex wherein all basic necessities could be purchased. A Paradise on Earth! one can say.Suchi and Vinay had spent their childhood there . They went to the same school, the same class. They ate their lunches together. The did their Home-Works together. They played in the park together!
Vinay being a boy, always loved to play gimmicks and scare Suchi. For instance, the kids always used to meet at the parks at around 5pm . On this Tuesday, Vinay had not come and Suchi waited and waited was concerned and bored. She went to the Krishnas..
"Aunty, Is Vinay there?", she spoke softly.
"What a question!" Mrs Krishna replied in an angry voice.,
"Errr.. sorry, I mean is he there at home?" ,she asked.
"Yeah,go into his room you silly girl.."Mrs Krishna said.
Suchi walked slowly. She went in to the room, to see the room dark. Pitch dark and no sign of Vinay. "Vinay, Vinay, you there?" asked Suchi in a scared voice.
"Boo! Baa! hahaha" howled Vinay and pounced at her and pushed her to the ground.
"Awwwww yelled Suchi " and she had broken into tears . She was shaking miserably and crying really bad. Vinay could not control his laughter and put on the lights. He held her tender hands and tried to console. In a few minutes all was good and both of them resumed playing.
Such was the tricks Vinay played and Suchi was smiling and gave a soft giggle in the taxi.
"Are you OK madam?", asked the taxi driver.
Suchi was in her own world , in Golden Homes Colony.
(someone please continue)
THE GOLDEN HOMES COLONY
This was a colony where about a 50 families lived a beautiful life. The colony was built in such a way that it had a wonderful elementary school, a high school , a nice little hospital ,a lovely park for thekids to play and ofcourse a shopping complex wherein all basic necessities could be purchased. A Paradise on Earth! one can say.Suchi and Vinay had spent their childhood there . They went to the same school, the same class. They ate their lunches together. The did their Home-Works together. They played in the park together!
Vinay being a boy, always loved to play gimmicks and scare Suchi. For instance, the kids always used to meet at the parks at around 5pm . On this Tuesday, Vinay had not come and Suchi waited and waited was concerned and bored. She went to the Krishnas..
"Aunty, Is Vinay there?", she spoke softly.
"What a question!" Mrs Krishna replied in an angry voice.,
"Errr.. sorry, I mean is he there at home?" ,she asked.
"Yeah,go into his room you silly girl.."Mrs Krishna said.
Suchi walked slowly. She went in to the room, to see the room dark. Pitch dark and no sign of Vinay. "Vinay, Vinay, you there?" asked Suchi in a scared voice.
"Boo! Baa! hahaha" howled Vinay and pounced at her and pushed her to the ground.
"Awwwww yelled Suchi " and she had broken into tears . She was shaking miserably and crying really bad. Vinay could not control his laughter and put on the lights. He held her tender hands and tried to console. In a few minutes all was good and both of them resumed playing.
Such was the tricks Vinay played and Suchi was smiling and gave a soft giggle in the taxi.
"Are you OK madam?", asked the taxi driver.
Suchi was in her own world , in Golden Homes Colony.
(someone please continue)
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